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Resin M-I-C · 07-20-2020, 10:42 PM

verse was ok
sharp is a lil light
interstellar was jeebus, wow
lightwork worked heavy.. solid
filler close

vs

40s cool
physique is a goodie
user panel was a bit long.. actually had a similar concept while writing, this coulda been worded way better
feelin the concept again.. needed rewording tho
feelin the chamber jawn but cuz ive seen variations

after the first two lines of adverse shit i was like here wee goo.. unfortunate it trailed at the end.. user has superb wording that can take a ehh line into something thats decent or above avg .. which is tough to beat if ur not consistent.. this is still close tho but that interstellar line leaned me sideways, fuckin nasty

v user

07-20-2020, 10:42 PM	#5
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150228	verse was ok sharp is a lil light interstellar was jeebus, wow lightwork worked heavy.. solid filler close vs 40s cool physique is a goodie user panel was a bit long.. actually had a similar concept while writing, this coulda been worded way better feelin the concept again.. needed rewording tho feelin the chamber jawn but cuz ive seen variations after the first two lines of adverse shit i was like here wee goo.. unfortunate it trailed at the end.. user has superb wording that can take a ehh line into something thats decent or above avg .. which is tough to beat if ur not consistent.. this is still close tho but that interstellar line leaned me sideways, fuckin nasty v user __________________ C. O. B. Last edited by Resin M-I-C; 07-20-2020 at 10:46 PM.