[Master Rock]

This was quite different. Both came at the subject with different angles and told a detailed story. One caught and peaked my interest, while the other not so much...One was work to read and the other was a breeze. Universe's opener paragraph reminded on a matrix type vibe...but that pedo metaphoricality left a sour taste in my mouth, I saw what you were doing but I rather just spit that out. 6 feet your story was more enjoyable, I found that everytime I was drawing away you brought me back in with the character speeches (that was clever and engaging). Both put a lot of heart into this but 6 brought a more vivid picture to hang on this wall. I like color, so I am giving it to 6.