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Old 07-09-2020, 12:48 AM   #8
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swear to god making me read through this after a hard day of work IF IT WASN'T SO GOOD ALL THE TIME I'D BE ANGRY

Universe - dope quote, I know several bastardizations of it and love the idea. also wild ride shit, I think this is a hard to write topic (whether or not it's a metaphor), but in general it was well written. either a little to deep or I was adverse to reading in between the lines.

Johnny - excellent piece, partial to this kind of fantasy. great story progression and reconnection, touching on the "inevitable"-ness that was strewn throughout.

I felt like Universe connected to the topic a lot better, but I'm just not digging the piece.

mvgt Johnny
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