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Zuch -

You are NOT Em, you getting cooked in this place
Your girl said you’re a one-hit wonder, and I can tell by the look on her face
Split his head from the ear to neck
He’s Devon Sawa if the Little Giants lost, she’s Hayden Panettiere on meth
That woman is BATTERED, but you’re trash with the slappin’ acts
She DOES belong in a Shelter, just not the one you’re rappin’ at
Des is a liberal, so why’d he hit that chick with a fist?
Now he’s yellin’ fuck the Free World when that bitch Lickity Split

Cool verse, started off very average but picked up heat as you went on. I didn’t really even get the mid-May line, is there a time stamp on the pic I’m missing? Still, dope verse overall, nice job.

Des -

Zuch a child at heart. My punches neverland with poise dude
That panface got a Hook nose that looks like it could fit all the lost boys too
nah des sees through ur ruse tho. But I spot a flawed plot
It’s unnecessary to distract a guy that hard to point & laugh at his bald spot

I wasn’t vibing with much here, bud. I get the Budweiser reference after your breakdown in the cord (lol), but it just wasn’t very impactful to me. I almost quoted the closer but it kinda felt a bit simple. Still a cool verse, you touched on a lot of individual things in the pic, which was nice, I love that you didn’t just focus on one thing, but you weren’t actually using that ammo in a clever enough or funny way for me.

Dope job to both of you getting this up so early though, just felt Zuch more on this one.

V - Zuch