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Old 06-28-2020, 04:10 AM   #4
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Think this was a sobering little piece Halo, I have trouble following your narratives at times but this one showed through a little clearer imo. A cancer patient slowly dying and just going through the treatment to no avail. We've seen a couple cancer pieces this season but I think this had a more realistic take and showed just the toll cancer puts on someone, and how hope slowly slips away from them day by day. Cool piece and LOVED this imagery piece

waking up past 3 hoping the days lost
stale pizza on the table ashes on the paint floor
a bird with no wings singing in the cave moss
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