Johnny - This was a grandiose tale that kind of intimidated me because in my mind I was just thinking the entire time that I don't have the patience to write something like this. And like Universe had mentioned that I thought this was the best verse I had read thus far in the league. Excellent narrative from start to finish, loved the riddle, and also the destription of your character's quest, was a dope little montage in my brain and it was cool the answer was so simple yet so complex really drove the quoted topic home. Excellent work
MMLP - This was kind of a fresh breath to see you take on something different this week, much like Inno but to be honest I'm not sure anyone's best foot forward could have beat Johnny this week let alone a keystyle, but you held your ground decent enough and had some cool visuals here as well as a vast vocabulary. Showed off a lot of astronomy knowledge and tied it back to the narrative which was cool. Decent verse.
Johnny wins this hands down he was just on a whole other level compared to most of the weekly pieces I've seen. Cool battle
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