Universe:
thoroughly enjoyed the read. pacing was on point and despite being 100 lines it didn't feel drawn out. loved the way you flipped the topic and have continued the narrative, the luthor twist half-way through caught me tbh, wasn't expecting it. solid piece, looking forward to next week.
Adverse:
Great depiction of Hemingway's life. You took on an interesting voice in the personification of literature watching the author, which was well done. The beginning of your piece reminded me of Lupe Fiasco's 'Put You On Game' which is high praise based on what I think of Lupe. Overall also solid work.
Good champ match here, two different approaches and both were executed well. I'm leaning towards Uni cuz his verse spoke to me more and it felt like a little smoother read, but reasonable voters can and will disagree.
v/ Universe
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