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Old 06-23-2020, 07:57 PM   #16
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When ya bodyweight hit 3 hunnid, it queued a frightening humility
You're the only Huge Name here that has nothing to do with writing ability
Light jab, but funny & worded well.. probably would've put this in the middle of the verse instead of the opener
I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts
Average.. the wording on the set-up kinda threw me off, seemed erroneous
Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting
Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing
Bear'll/barrel kinda played.. I appreciate the internals & the execution
You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet
The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps
lol @ wet farts.. this was good; fresh concept & delivered directly
Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate?
Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray
Again, I appreciate the rhyming ability, but this didn't land for me.. seen the bar/spirit/shot/tray connection done too any times for it be impactful.. & calling his fat "Jello" just seemed awkward lol
This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding
I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey
Fresh connections & worded well.. not a huge punch, but the set-up lent itself well to it
The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy
It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body
These set-ups, man.. Idk if you're trying to build up the second line for impact or what, but they just read w/ a lot of extraneous verbiage.. I put this in the same category as the Jello Shot bar
I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser?
Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User
Great set-up, but "Ab/User" & "abuser" is too simple & they're not really pronounced similarly
Your waist is big, holmes. Pray it shrinks, go for loss
Given the # of floors you Make Shift,
you'll need something of thattt^nature to escape the sinkhole you cause
Nice multies, definitely helped this land.. decent bar, overall
You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted
U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button
Eh closer.. I liked the swag on it, but this didn't really hit hard & was pretty telegraphed

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They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is?
Funny, relevant opener.. no complaints here
Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life
clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe
Exhaust pipe kinda played.. decent flip, could've been worded better
Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board
…Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force
Clever & worded really well.. this hit
Listen dawg, I know I joked your girl was a pig and all
But that’s just cuz after I stretched her, she can only shop at Big & Tall
Eh, this was a miss
Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees
that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines
Thought you could've worded this to be more impactful.. the concept itself is fire, though
I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby
& After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body
Simple & effective, I surprisingly haven't seen the "Spotlight" concept flipped before.. wording was crisp, too
This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids
Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did
Light jab.. good wording & straightforward delivery
Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent
When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt
Another decent jab.. kinda simple, but execution was clean
High scholars will laugh when this guy hollers
If he’s cashing checks, they’re all from Ruth and they totaled to five dollars
Eh.. this needed more to make it land for me
You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics
Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches
Simple ender.. decent generic; would've liked to see you go a little more complex here


So this was a pretty close one.. I feel like User's bars were either hit or miss, but his wording & the way he delivered his lines made his misses read slightly better than Barc's.. I liked Barc's verse & I'm a big fan of multies & relevant set-ups, but I felt like his connections were pretty stretched in parts & relied heavily on the rhyme scheme to carry them.. it was still an above average verse, but left something to be desired.. I'm leaning towards User as his punches landed cleaner & his bars did everything Barc's did w/out the excessive wordage.. dope battle, guys

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