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Old 06-21-2020, 07:12 PM   #7
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cool drops from both...

i thought ad's opener was decent, the gun bar/robbed was dope imo... the plot twisted/shyamalan was fire too... mattress didn't do much for me but the closer was also a cool name play. Not sure if they've been used on him before (I haven't gone and read the back catalog of battles here) but they seemed creative enough.

Plot had a cool opener, and some cool wordplay ideas but they seemed a little stretched to me... adderall/ad at all im' guessing? and the naive/ny eve was a cool concept but it's also a bit of a stretch. closer again decent idea but the execution didn't land hard.

overall, Ad had stronger hits and an overall more polished drop,so he gets my vote. enjoyed the read guys.

v/ Adverse
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