yeah I thought this was pretty close...
bombz opener was solid and his follow-up was clever too, peloton and hot wings I wasn't feeling, termite was cool imo... res bar didn't work for me, closer was decent.
evaD i liked how you took current events from the site and incorporated them instead of just generic punches, usually a good idea imo... thought the bourdain line was the highlight of your verse.
both had some hits and misses imo, and i enjoyed reading both. I think bombz opener was lotb (though the bourdain line from evaD isn't far behind it imo) but overall I enjoyed the creativity of evaD's punches overall a little more. Others may disagree, but for me...
v/ evaD
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