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Old 06-21-2020, 06:49 PM   #8
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i thought maximus had a dope opener, his next line didn't work for me (playing bitch/bayonet is too much of a stretched rhyme imo) the rest were concepts that were cool but didn't land hard, with some re-wording they could've worked better imo.

coop had some creative wordplay punches with the cancer/tumor line and the gladiator/blue waffles punch but they didn't land as hard as max's opener.

Overall I got Max taking it with an overall better attempt. some cool ideas from both though...

v/ Maximus
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