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Old 06-21-2020, 06:35 PM   #12
Artifice
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I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts
Careful, a single shot means farewell when I'm blasting
Hollows cook raw. Chicago football; 1st Down the Bear'll have you Passing
You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet
The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps
Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate?
Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray
This is NOT a Simple Jack && the blasts are awful-sounding
I'll bring this Tropic Thunder that could blow the black off robert downey
You're beaten, bitch. Your speech is twisted & lip is busted
U are rocked. Alarm clock; you went to Sleep the Minute I hit your Button


vs

They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is?
Depression's got him, alone in the garage thinking he lost life
clearly it inspired your girl the way she uses her mouth to exhaust pipe
Talks like he gets ladies, probably lays out a flattering cheese board
…Then go to his crib, and more pigs walk out than Atlanta’s police force
Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees
that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines
I’m not saying I’m the best, but I make it work as a hobby
& After this, the only spotlight you’ll be in, is the search for your body

those were the punches that landed well for each imo. solid outing by both, I wasn't feeling Barc's opener and really thought User's opener was solid, but I felt like User's verse wasn't hitting as hard toward the end. Barc leaned on the weight punches a bit, but there was still enough variety to make it work imo. Can see this coming down to personal preferences as both drops were dope, but for me...

v/ Barcotic
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