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Old 06-21-2020, 02:40 PM   #7
Adverse
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Max:

fuck up your molars with a rifle in your mouth, i'm cold with the piece
i'll have those Teeth on the Extension like sticking a comb through a weave
^ good opener imo

i get gory, stab your facial tissues and nostrils.. i ain't playing bitch
i'm bringing a knife to the Muscle Around Your Nose, that's a bayonet
^ think i see what you're attempting but it missed for me

drunk shooting, if i miss your head i'll hit your jugular when i employ triggers
bringing the cap to your neck, it rivals the patella of Floyd's killer
^ been a lot of bars like this lately, it's okay

that's a Shot to your Larynx, you get shook when i strike hard
i'm putting a Heavy-metal in your Apple, no rock music on ipods
^ ehhhhh nah

still on a killing spree, blood leaking when i'm spraying lead
i'm dropping so many shells in Coop it rivals hens laying eggs
^ okay closer

Coop:
Just a shy lil broke bitch. You tried, but you lied & you're bogus
Sure, you're focused & driven, but can't a Ford to be drivin a Focus
^ ehhh used

My lines are the dopest. Your battles are dead & usually played
We don't need even to see C your ancer to throw you in a tumor a grave
^ bleh idk just not a hit

Dude, just behave. You choose to be gay. S'why you fumble the bag
And your small circle of friends is really just the number you have
^ i didn't get this

I'm done w/ this fag. He pays hoes just to eat em out?? Find a new brothel
Maximus acts like he's Gladiator till he learns about blue waffles
^ okay wordplay but don't get where the tie in is

This dude's awful. Playoffs bout to start. Trust me bitch, do better
Even though you've never won in one... at least it's your new record
^ okay...

Yeah I've seen better from both this came off rushed on both sides and most of coops concepts didn't hit for me whatsoever Max had opener and okay closer and that was enough here

V/Max
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