Art:
I peeped ur body of work, someone give the coroner a call
cuz i'm Art so when I spray cans u end up all over the walls
^ I've seen this angle before but the name tie in makes it alright
this battle & a spotlight? A lot of lines on your plate
but beef w/ a Mac I'll devour... along w/ the fries and a shake
^ could have been worded a little better imo but is decent
in the time that it takes to put your best foot forward chump
i'll cut it off, that's a leg up for me & leavin' u more than stumped
^ cool i liked this
ur forrest gump with a forward slump, stupid is as stupid does
only win's against Sinacog? God, no punch that's just brutal cuz
^ also seen the sinacog/no punch combo before but still lol
u're less than impressive so gettin' ur second's just a wack thought
watch me fold Mac in half, put him in a bag & I ain't talkin' a laptop
^ Thought this was a nice closer
Mac:
i see you havent been the best partner, or the most frisky
cuz ur girl has kept her legs open for me so long... something smells fishy
^ bland used concept
so u must not be that tasty snack
10/10 girls that tasted Artificial flavours agree they'd rather eat Mac
^ Thought this was an alright angle
I don't mean to attack ur family, or crush their confidence
UK needed ur mom to top off Brexit, a jump and boom they're a new continent
^ think this is over my head? Or just doesn't hit
attend the consequences, this topical guy wont bare the fatigue
so if you wanna try NBL.. you're better off champing that 3-man league
^ think you got your leagues confused as NBL is an Australian/New Zealand basketball league as opposed to the 3 man league you're referring to
talking bout leagues, I know a game that makes Art scream
anyone that LOL's with him it's cuz they're both playin in the same team
^ i see what you tried to do but wording wasn't great
Though Art is more of the topical head here he showed a veterans presence nothing too flashy but a bunch of jabs that pushed him over the top, Mac you're a newer dude I'd advise you to work on creativity on your punches make them relevant and just fine tune your wording make your punches a little harsher and you'll be fine. Decent battle gents
V/Art
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