Netcees - View Single Post - Week 10 SPOTLIGHT: UserName vs. Barcotic

Universe · 06-20-2020, 12:40 PM

Barcotic

I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art
Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts

- Flow and multi's here were spot on.

You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet
The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps

- lol made me chuckle.

Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate?
Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray

- hate gun bars but this worked on multiple levels so it gets a pass.

The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy
It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body

- wordplay was decent but I'm feeling your flow and multi's man. Even the bars I left out were smooth in that department.

I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser?
Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User

- this was cool but could be worded differently - I don't think someone who seeks helps technically works on an abuser... . nitpicking, I know. But I like lines that work both ways flawlessly.

Good verse overall, flow was butter. Good multi's. I've seen better wordplay from you before but this still was enjoyable.

UserName

They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit
Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is?

- lol good opener.

Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees
that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines

- haha. Made me chuckle.

This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids
Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did

- Clever way to flip your two battles this week.

Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent
When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt

- lol. I sometimes feel Barc isn't far off from this... or a school shooting.

You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics
Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches

- now this was a mental picture I could've done without lol... but savage all the same.

Cool verse overall, User. Flow and multi's on point. Damn you two reminded me I need to work on my flow and shorten up my bars in a battle sense cuz this was impressive.

So I got 5-5 here. Hmm. If I got to edge it to one, I gotta go with the one that had more wordplay in it... just a personal preference for me. This battle will be back and forth regardless.

Vote - Barcotic

Entertaining guys, thanks.

06-20-2020, 12:40 PM	#9
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Barcotic I maul most, earning wins despite flawed votes. I'm the best at this art Next time I take a Handout, it'll be in the compost w/ the rest of your parts - Flow and multi's here were spot on. You'll be running like your wet farts if the tec sparks on the fly, bet The only Gun Powder you're using helps with stretch marks on your biceps - lol made me chuckle. Obese 'n hella soft, mixed w/ gay. Think you'd ever rob this estate? Approach Bar's..I'll make you a Spirit and leave your Jello Shot w/ the Tray - hate gun bars but this worked on multiple levels so it gets a pass. The crime will not be fast or untold. I cannot relax on a known softy It's fate, not mean. Baywatch scene; I'll make a Splash with a Slow Body - wordplay was decent but I'm feeling your flow and multi's man. Even the bars I left out were smooth in that department. I'm not certain its fact, but is every orange haired person a fat loser? Seeking help for food addiction is the only way you'd work on an Ab,User - this was cool but could be worded differently - I don't think someone who seeks helps technically works on an abuser... . nitpicking, I know. But I like lines that work both ways flawlessly. Good verse overall, flow was butter. Good multi's. I've seen better wordplay from you before but this still was enjoyable. UserName They say I’m Peter Griffin, just with hard ass wit Well, how’s it feel to be The Meg of this site more than your arm tat is? - lol good opener. Not a fan of 90's slang, but my whole team agrees that you've been taken out and nuked more times than Lean Cuisines - haha. Made me chuckle. This week’s a 2 for 1, it’s goat herdin’ the way I’m roping kids Pockets? I’m hitting Neighborin’ Bars harder than COVID did - Clever way to flip your two battles this week. Everyone at NC laughs at you, and i know this guy gets bent When he drops and the 'Cord explodes like his last suicide attempt - lol. I sometimes feel Barc isn't far off from this... or a school shooting. You go to work all day, you should know you can’t fade the Tropics Meanwhile I got my feet up at your crib, gettin’ head while your baby watches - now this was a mental picture I could've done without lol... but savage all the same. Cool verse overall, User. Flow and multi's on point. Damn you two reminded me I need to work on my flow and shorten up my bars in a battle sense cuz this was impressive. So I got 5-5 here. Hmm. If I got to edge it to one, I gotta go with the one that had more wordplay in it... just a personal preference for me. This battle will be back and forth regardless. Vote - Barcotic Entertaining guys, thanks. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..