Universe - wild ride. I think this was a really great double twist - from suicidal to stunt man to what's really going on. great allusions and foreshadowing, I was suspicious at the name of the company but didn't catch on right away. incredibly solid performance - I've been away long enough that I don't think I've seen your pieces before (besides your How To Rap guide in OM - so I had high expectations that you've met and exceeded). awesome job also making it feel true to comic books - tying in other events to show "one universe", tf.
Scar - great verse as well - interesting you both hit on super heroes (maybe ext talks gave some inspiration). this felt like a non-true spider man write, as in a kid living his fantasy to escape his reality - projecting the super villain to his (and his mom's) abuser, trying to keep things intact, and making scenarios where he's the hero - eventually culminating in an attempt to be the hero irl. incredibly solid piece (few typos here and there but no biggy), and vs any other piece would have most likely taken this.
mvgt - Universe
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