Pharaoh - clearly rushed for time or something. while the verse doesn't do much, props for putting something out so there could be a vote.
MMLP - felt off in a few places. I dug the twist and caught it a bit before the ending, but I wish there had been a few more connections (though there's a few great ones). "reach for the sky" line was a re-read moment cuz it came across in Woody's voice so I was like "yo that's not how he intended... wait a fucking second". the last four lines seemed sloppy.
mvgt MMLP
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