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Old 06-14-2020, 11:43 PM   #13
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u only dope on Opposite Day .. I don’t respect dude as a rapper
Head shot .. they can lay him face down in the casket .. he used to doin shit backwards
^ pretty good conceptually but didn't hit super hard, solid opener

U been texting since dialup and use the same concepts .. there played and lame
Funny the way they delivered internet changed but ur style of punchline stayed the same
^ kinda statement-ish but i can rock with it

This pacifist wouldn’t even hit the gym ..noodle arms can’t lift a gat stupid
and This here knife works heavy lifting .. it’s best to put your back into it
^ alright decent

I’m swimming in cash - U pissed off cuz ya wife brings home dudes to suck
This fools a cuck and he’s taken more golden showers than Scrooge mc Duck
^ lmao okay

Beating me is impossible .. u better off flossing using a hand gun
Cuz I ‘blackout’ when rappin.. ur punches lose power before u even land one
^ don't know if the concept is super fresh but it landed for me

U txt rap like it’s 1993..it’s almost like u got the archives locked in ur memory
No typo ..I ain’t hit the space bar by accident when I say u the worst Eva D
^ not too hard of a punch but okay

Gassed off a little hype in the league til I shoot ur face off and close your tomb
Make sure the buzz will go to your head .. flys love corpses an open wounds
^ decent closer

David:
Home intruder time, twin glocks with beams, you know the shooter's primed
when two dots come over U and turn your noodle to the Stüssy sign
^ damn alright hot opener

I approach with stealth and wont be seen until your shit just erupts
So a Silencer wont even be needed to get the pistol to Hush
^ good concept delivery fell flat

If Dave's a crazy eastender, then this battle won’t get me hyped long
cuz If i gave a fuck about this Queen Vic id be drinking pints with that Tyke Wand
^ okay not really a punch but clever

Im not supposed to win this shit, it wasn't written in the script
so this act of murder'll be off the cuff like Travis Bickle on this bitch
^ not really feeling might just be me though

It's a trip whenever Vic wins cuz his rhymes are low level and barely noticeable
so ill just sweep you under the pile of dickriders fallin over themselves to vote for you
^ ehh awkward wording but decent

When his bird is near it’s like German beer, for real what a slutty sket
I pour out on that hoegaarden then She give head til there’s nothing leffe
^ decent play

I guess ya peeps will miss you, but really the irony becomes official-
when a self proclaimed Million Dollar Man’s whole town is holding Vigils
^ don't know about this one either

Don't think Hush was excellent here but he had consistent jabs and Dave faltered in my opinion, decent bout

V/Hush
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