bulldog ryhme was off but that punch was fiiire
seen some ad lines, it was aigh
spongebob was a miss for me man
holy spirit got me like why didnt i think of that concent, i fucks with it heavy
stand up was ehhhh
dafodils caught me off guard lol punch missed
closer ok but drug lines been done like that before
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starting off swingiin with that newcomer line
shift was cool
throw u off stories lines been done, this was ok.. fly caper tho lol
eleventeen was corny but funny
fall guy platter lol.. punch coulda been better also
drift was ok
bckham coulda been way better
this was close, smash started off solid but fell off sharply.. same with dave but his lows werent as low.. first time reading smash, solid potential.. this wasnt up to par from what i’ve read from dave but if he gets more consistant he’s gonna be a problem here
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