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Old 06-13-2020, 08:40 PM   #9
Adverse
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Resin:
Aiyyo
it’s a cross to bear.. he sucks so i’ll carrry this battle on my damn shoulder..
Your verse is Stigmata.. you got too many holes in what your gonna Hand over.
^ ehhh it's decent. Thought it could have been a little cleaner tho

I’m straight out the gate shootin.. berretta’s pushing ur stance..
See me ‘pull up from the jump’.. like u trying to fuckin put on your pants.
^ hahahaha i liked this

oh u a funny guy huh.. but aint no one feelin this pig..
put this Joker in the hospital.. shiiittt u already know i’ll drop the heat on this kid.
^ ehh okay
This creep is a lame. Ya legacy is Aloe carryin ur ass, he cheated the game..
u rubbed elbows with the greats.. but u better not look my way findin ur seat on a plane.
^ alright not too harsh but okay

the way u break furniture? wood is ur rival.. being a loser‘s ur title..
u laying in the middle of a bed makes it resemble the mat in the Kumite final.
^ good one

oh User’s a good guy? calm ur tits.. it’s Netcees.. he aint armed a smidge..
bein a cool & collected head dont make a stink here, u better off in jeffrey dahmers fridge.
^ i don't feel the sting here kinda statement ish

Res aint keepin it PC.. ima embarass the shit outta this gay hater..
fat fuckkk.. you have a hard drive to save face & it’d STILL be buffering days later.
^ decent imo

u def hated my suicide line last week, do i gotta dumb down on my text?
u just mad a door doesnt have 5 knobs to tie nooses around each one ur necks.
^ yeah tying a rope around a door knob didn't make sense to me

Ur nothing to me.. ur a slob that’s hoping to plead..
All the No Shows in the world doesnt even qualify for what u’d consider Open for Feed.
^ i liked but execution could have been smoother

You die next. Combos for ur diet plan.. then see this guy rest..
cuz a punch’ll curb ur appetite.. swallowin ur own gums takes 7 years to digest.
Mahfucka.
^ dope closer good shit

User:
Fracture, Orc, Ajax
...with talent like that & this Asian fuck is the winner?
You can't hang with these cats, but he has hung a couple others for dinner
^ simplish concept but alright

Pizzahut, Taco Bell, KFC, my arteries will likely be done
but statistically, I'd die quicker if I just asked you to drive me to one
^ haha good stereotype bar

Nike put him through school, & onward this Slope would journey
Because his Full House folded more pairs for them than a poker tourney
^ okay i felt this

Bluff is the call, so I’m saying this guy’s nothing at all
Make another joke about my sai's and I'll stab you with the one on your wall
^ good sais/size is simplish but the punch was effective

When he feels romantic, he prefers the tender route
& asks his girl to eat her pussy... then gets his blender out
^ looool nice

Saw your verse last week, and you got laid flat dummy
I guess there weren’t enough L’s to give that Dave Chap to ever make that funny
^ Thought this was one was meh execution could have used work

I’m nice with the hands while this ninja gets in fights w/ his clan
‘Cuz the only Asian customs he remembers helped smuggle rice to his fam
^ ehhh decent

Was with your girl in the shower, she slobbed the cock all day
and I had her slappin' the tiles harder than your last Mahjong game
^ dope bar here

Lets take a moment, the countries rioting and liberals are keen to burn
there hasn’t been this much outcry over the left since your last illegal turn
^ another asian joke but your wording ia fresh

Fat jokes fat jokes fat jokes, your losing so just stop it
My verse’ll turn ya girls OnlyFans into OnlyForUserAndTheTropics
^ ehhh this didn't hit for me

Overall i thought User had more consistency here. Resin had some big misses with the doorknob line and what not, User kept hits coming even if there weren't many haymakers.

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