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Old 06-13-2020, 12:53 PM   #8
Adverse
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You should be shot for writing a bar like that...it was literally shit
For dropping THAT Flintstone line...I’ll go BamBam on this Kid with the Stick
^ Good flip but I'm sure the concept has been done, it was relevant though

That .38 in your mouth end it for you...it’s gonna do more than just spark
It’s the Early Bird...This old man gon’ be eatin’ the Special before it gets dark
^ i liked this a lot here

You used to be good, Des! What happened?...You’re writing is shit, fairy
You just don’t have it in you anymore...like your wife when she miscarried
^ this was harsh, not like battle rap harsh just fucking mean lol

Too inconsistent to ever be top tier...Dude this hurts a bit, I know
I am NOT worried...you’ve never dropped TWO Fresh verses in a row
^ blah

Pistol to your whole family...fuck’em, they all dead
Only time YOU ‘messing with a piece’ to push a wig back is to cover that bald head
^ this got a laugh

Folks should be shot if they like his bars...or think this fag’s shit’s a banger
Two pistols...anyone feeling Judicial be the ones getting banged with the hammer
^ liked this play, had a similar one this week

Cash is elite...while you’re boring, you’re average, you’re mid-tier
Sure, we have the same amount of wins...but it took you FORTY more battles to get there
^ good statement bar right here

I would’ve had you ranked wayyyy lower; You’re GARBAGE...that’s what I swear, guy
If we did any Receding, off the top...you’d be farther back than your hairline
^ yeah good play and as someone with a receeding hairline it hurts a little lol

Des:
faces DLB last round and it’s “that one’s a coon...”
he hates them so much he won’t even listen to dark side of the moon
^ i mean kind of statement-ish and not super creative

Look. u ain’t shit faggot. So here’s another reminder
when we ask the champ if he got Cash App we wont be talking bout Grindr
^ seen something like this before but liked grindr touch

u Amish fuck. quit text. Go work in the fields and perspire
style all washed up. His Pennsylvania bitch like Talia Shire
^ i googled but still didn't really get what you were going for?

dude gets drunk and then fucks men. but first he will drive miles...
so if the rumspringa leak, no one’ll sniff out a questionable lifestyle
^ wordplay was decent but lacked some sting

& ur racist as FUCK... “my grandpa owned yours!??” Kid, you’ll get wrecked.
When trump said he was gonna give cash to the masses, we thought he meant stimulus checks
^ this was okay

everyone knows I lost a kid tho. & I often mourn for his little life
buuuut I’d wish that both the others had misscarried too if they shared ur opinion on civil rights
^ this didn't sit right with me, just came off as a flip.

give these hands a try. des been known to damage lives
they be finding cash in so many places like cleaning out the house after grandma dies
^ probably you're best bar tbh

Des fell flat to me here, just wasn't his best work. Cash had a couple haymakers and i think he won this convincingly.

V/Cashius
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