Adverse had better concepts and executed them better. Wasn’t really a fan of either verse but wanderer had some pretty used up concepts unfortunately. This was pretty close and props to both for your efforts.
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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