[Flow]

This was a strong piece technically and the imagery really worked. That first verse was really strong in terms of rhyme structure and set the feel an tone for the piece well. Felt the second dipped slightly in terms
Of content/descriptive imagery for me but kept it rolling and engaging through some nice rhyme schemes and the final verse while lesser for me in terms
Of technicality it really gave the whole setting you had created to this point some nice chunky content. Nice close to tie it off an certainly some good thought provoking undertones.

Nice drop pal you could tell this has been well polished