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Old 06-07-2020, 06:50 AM   #7
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Originally Posted by UserName View Post
FEEL THE HEAT

I don’t respect you, I know you’re a slouch in a bout
So I’m just gonna use this bar as an opener, like Ouch when he’s out
Gets a pass from me for comedic factor but not the hardest
I’m just loungin’ about, while you must have the worst depression
The only gun line I'm in, is at the Pawn Shop sellin' your murder weapon
I’m feeling this, great creativity. However, “your” murder weapon sounds the weapon HE’s just used to kill someone rather than yours... this my only critique
Clowned from a distance, now I'll win this round in an instant
He's had his back against the wall so much, it has mounting equipment
Dope
He's blind to facts, we know you're gay, it's not like we try to laugh
Not when 'Matte Black' isn’t just a paint for him, it's his Grindr Match
Reaching a bit... it’s ok though and kinda funny
Lyin' ass, this guy date rapes, and his promises are hollow too
Although his dates get rags to their lips more than Molotov bottles do
Dope
Lord knows, I’m a God to you, but his votes make me sad to hit him
‘Cuz If ANY of my lines are 3/10, ...it's in a "strokes until orgasm" system
Lol ok
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Originally Posted by Coop View Post
What a let down....

I thought I'd get a high-end legend. User? One punch & his fatass is leakin
NC hates me so much I must be on probation: I keep getting trash on the weakend
Already feel like ur a little more wordy than user but this doesn’t necessarily matter, and this is ok
The whole site thinks I'm crazy. You'd think the odds were stacked in your favor
But how you gonna cook me? You the only 'seasoned vet' who lacks any flavour cool
Fatboy wants beef but can't handle the steaks. Ya punches aint swell, son:
It’s extra-rare when they’re red, cuz ya verses are NEVER well-done
This is well done (HA) but my issue with it is that it don’t come off too fresh.. seen a lot of well done / rare flips
He wrote 20 at first, but saw it was only weak shit from outta storage
So this dumbass cut some lines down, now his verse has a power shortage
This is alright, good creativity
I know you dyin for a win, but it's a reach dude. It takes no effort to beat you
But since ur still all gassed up, go ahead n mix ammonia and bleach too
Not overly feeling this
Been here a decade & STILL a bum bitch who never won shit; An irrelevant buffoon
who can't get anyone to talk about him... he's the biggest elephant in the room
It’s not packing enough sting


@Da Brayn Lord go head & post his weak shit
I’ve got date rape rags / Molotov bottles and mountain equipment as my two favourite bars... then maybe the depression / gun line so already, I’ve got User taking this. Coop, I didn’t think you had a bad verse at all bro I just think you were outpunched by your opponent here. The bars I weren’t feeling from you were a hair worse than users too...

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