Aero-The first was funny, but with all the build up I expected more. 2nd line I want mad about.wrong pipe was good. The I’m split was lotb. Catfish wasn’t a hit for me though nice imagery. closer was decent.
Overall though it was a funny ass verse. Had entertainment value.
Zelph- opener was funny. Nickel was okay bit basic, dressed up well. I get the tie in of planteers but doesn’t work for me when I read it. Bullying Austin was okay. Hereditary was cool.bopped with the hammer was decent.
It was a decent verse overall. A couple of concepts could’ve been refined better.
I’ve got opener, wrong pipe, I’m torn lotb, close
Vs opener hereditary and closer
V/Aero
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