slecht
He can't capture me, I run wild. I am slecht, the assassin of this dumb child.
No need to remain anonymous but I am exposing this fuck, no trump files.
The way this ends is terrible. You ain't rapping, you're battling
Idiot chump thinks he's fun. All I need is one night...standing by him with the biggest gun
Then point it at him..getting smash till that body ain't seen no more...That's a hit & run.
Cool flow, weak punch
I carry an eagle. Enough bullets to serve and have smash down.
Desert's with me, & I am firing it up quicker than staff at the burning man camp ground.
Meh enough gun bars gimme something clever
At first, his girl won't know when I kill him. She won't be around to check...
Might think it's a murder hoax till I give his miss information...about the death.
Could've done without the second ellipsis. Not the harshest concept
I am that gutter. His family will investigate it so I will need a fast cover.
if his siblings want to play games too, I will also get rid of Smash's Brothers.
So so
Closer had the best potential. Your wording isn't bad, I'd say work on cleverness. To be real, I could've said "how are you dissing him directly?" Under each line.
3/10
VS
Smash
U buggin wit no potential, But Im so gonna end u,
You're clearly nothing but a gnat to me n ion care if that termite offend u
Ok
Please don't talk to me about cadence, I'll make sure the doubt faded
But you... You the type writers laugh at even on old machines because you outdated
Filler
I got your girl... Sitting here ready to blow, but her friends talkin shit is the craziest tho
Cuz they sitting here all dishin (audition) like they trying to make it a show
As much as it seems the majority of people here can't catch WP, never explain your shit in the verse. The real ones will catch it. The way this is written though, all dishin.. .what? We got different slang, I've never said somebody was dishing.
And what the fuck is your name bro... Is it something tough, well I looked it up
And basically ima make u jump in between these 2 ropes... I'll double dutch
Not the greatest rhyme. Not a good diss.
Fuck you up in a timely source wit an unrivaled force, like what is he point in even surviving for?
I'll hospitalize you...while playing Pokemon go... Then break in and beat you till your Ivysaur.
Meh
3/10
Unfortunately, no standouts in either verse.
Flipping a coin here....
V SMASH
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