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Old 06-05-2020, 10:22 AM   #15
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evad

Those predictions? Just fiction. But I’m glad I read it
Cus if Adverse the Heavy favourite ima Body Weight like Calisthenics
Ok
The disses he spit are all misses and shit. Guess ya boy is senile
Cus his Execution’s bout as smooth as how they did Delacroix in Green Mile
Above avg filler
Knifestyles deployed like they’re a lifestyle choice. He bout to cop a hurtin
When I cut The Idiot with Bowie like im Iggy Pop in Berlin
Wasnt feelin
Yeah I’m Dave, don’t get it backwards - I ain’t-Cha Pal but it’s likely
That if you’re Banking on winning this when Azealia fate you gon cry cheat
Wasn't a smooth wp, but points for the attempt.
Not a Lot to Offer and your Numbers Up, ain’t that some shit
So I’m thinking furniture auction - WinChester Draws and the Hammer Clicks
These capitalized words are fucking with me
If that tough guy act is doctored now you committing malpractice
You couldn’t have seen AdverseCity less if you were repping Atlantis
I like the wp here a lot. But when you think about the punch, it aint harsh. "You havent seen adversity" ehhh
Born better off means you were never raw
When heads were ringing alarms with Tenor Saw Ad was feelin’ alarmed bout Tennis Sores
That second line is horrendous
Attending Wimbledon’s the only time he could get Centre Court, he’s bound to lose
When I sneak up on Ad Vantage Point and Tie em up on my way to Round Deuce
Another good wp, another bland punch.


The wordplay was good, the wording was subpar. If you take OUT the WP, and just analyze what you are saying to diss him, you're left with shit like "I'm going to body him" "I'll cut him" "You'll claim i cheated" "You haven't seen adversity" "I'm going to win". I need the same level of wp, but better disses

5/10


VS

Adverse

BITCH so let’s do this! Why’d you join the tourney kid ain’t Gon prove shit
I’ll take you out here in the first round, then waste another clip on you just for amusement
Where's the diss
He always had them BIG dreams, a slick ride with the drop-top
Signed into the NBL and got his wish….kinda...when Coop took his top off!
Not according to the sheep in the league, good wp. Decent
Evad ain't spraying SHIT...he must have got a kink in the line
On the other hand this mag fuck up your whole profile...like INC did mine
Didn't resonate
I ain't shooting to kill, put you in a coma when that pistol blow
Your wife will have to pull the plug on Dave like she canceled Lil Dicky show
Filler
Your chick scheming on your well meaning, you ain’t pokin’ but you treat her right
I’ll find your girl Dave and Buster in the bathroom for a token and a pizza slice
Cmon bruh now i KNOW YOU SEEN my dave and buster bar last week, AND the punch is similar. (I can fuck your girl, it'll only take ______) I aint saying it's a bite, but at least wait a month. Mine was better.

4/10


Adverse's verse was MUCH easier to read, but no sting to anything. Had I not done D&B last week, that would probably be LOTB. I don't think you should've went 10. Going less backfired here, you just needed maybe 1 fire bar to take this.

I'll vote evaD
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