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Oh shit you both got it in early, props...


Zuch: This was fire, back to the Zuch I know. Everything felt fresh and your wording was on point. Cool opener. 4 outta 5 moms was lulz. Slide open on Bash was funny/new to me. No contact was a nice current flip. Me too was okay, Glycerine was fun, manifesto was good, closer was cool.

Ryno: Open was okay, Van Dyke was funny, I wasn’t so sure on pundit awful at first but liked it better on second read. Lol @ children and strangers. Tyranny/tier and he was good, don’t think I’ve seen that before. Motor City was okay, just felt it needed something harder to really insult him with it. Lol @ show of Hands. I took the avatar line to be about his golf swing posturing, could be off with that but it works. It was okay, again could have been worded more harshly for more zing IMHO. This one was a close one, pretty tied up, but I have Zuch edging it with better concepts and execution this time out - there were just more lines of his I found I enjoyed over those from Ryno, I really liked Tyranny though as I haven’t seen that done before surprisingly. Good battle, gentleman!