[Ajax]

This was really close, and an entertaining battle. You guys each have a style that I can dig (concise and to the point), although each had several ehh punches/concepts that could have been done better. But, there were also enough funny jabs to make it a good read.

I know I’ve been really harsh on the forced wordplay style that seems to have become popular these days (perhaps overly so), but Ryno’s tyranny line was ok, as far as those kind of lines go. I didn’t like the pundit line at all, because I couldn’t tie in the punch to the word flip. Unless I’m mistaken, the closer was a Last Airbender reference, and was ok... except Zuch O isn’t pronounced “Zuko.”

Zuch’s no contact and me too lines were cool, and to the point. A couple of the others, I wasn’t feeling as much... but, all in all, it was a solid little verse.

Overall, I think Zuch edged it. His verse was slightly wittier, although both verses were pretty cool (and it was really close). Zuch wins.