Multi-syllable rhymes - Adverse
Cadence/Rhythm/Tempo - Johnny
Imagery - Adverse
No typos - Johnny (couple typos from Adverse)
STORY - TIE
Understandability - Johnny (a bit confused at Adverse's ending)
Personal Preference (impact on myself as a reader) - Adverse
Relation to Picture - Adverse
I've read each multiple times and decided to do this brief breakdown into categories.
Bottom line, although I was a bit confused by Adverse's ending, his piece as a whole seemed more momentous and slightly more impressive.
This is not to say that Johnny's was bad, as I enjoyed his piece about struggle through alcoholism, but I'm casting the vote to Adverse.
Thanks for the reads
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