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Old 06-01-2020, 08:06 PM   #11
Steve Fox
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I don't switch guns, this tha Majors everyday I go to war with the same Nine
Mac Aint gang gang...but next week his record will be throwing a bloods gang sign

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v - snitch. Both didn't drop anything of note for me, outside of the gang sign bar, which was a witty observation. It was okay and worded enough to get the point across, but the bars between you two were not too good. Mac's punches and wording were not interesting, while the concepts lacked any sort of wit or imaginative items for me to see as a quotable. Snitch was in the same sort of category, dropping the opener, but then falling off right after and not really delivering anything else of interest. I would suggest both go read up on older NBL battles and sift through the archives to get more into how to connect punches at a better rate, but the effort of showing is appreciated.
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