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Old 06-01-2020, 09:49 AM   #9
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I don't switch guns, this tha Majors everyday I go to war with the same Nine
Mac Aint gang gang...but next week his record will be throwing a bloods gang sign

cool opener

Aim, bust shots, hit target, ok the Job is done,
Grab cloth, wipe weapon, then dump tha mac that'll get rid of the body n tha gun

concept is played, but i dig the execution

Bitch desperate for friends, wants lessons from Titans of texting
Mac stay running behind his teacher like Tyson punch out training sessions

eh ok

Stop crying, bitter bitch, you suck, u don't get votes..To Bad
We can't help ya verses are a combination of everything wrong with text like Coops Mag

nah this is a miss for me, too simple

You love my style, you follow my every move...a real Snitch Stan
Piss me off I'll slap ya with ya notepad....but only if shit hits the fan....

nah


like Dr. Strange, wont let this end any differently
1 in 14 million scenarios u win, will need a large amount of cash to buy peoples dignity

not feeling this

bitch you're over, surprise... want a last dish?
last you'll see are Stars before closing your eyes.. call me Make-a-Wish

wording could be harsher, ive seen the stars in eyes concept done a lot but make a wish is an ok angle on it, just think the execution is lacking

i'll murder him without moving an inch, like i'm cancer
i don't always grab a typewriter, but when I do it's a Tommy gun vs. a gangster

not feeling this

snitchs a tragedy i'll murder, hoping he passed away fast
ur love life's a last summer classic.. a bunch of noshows and buried in the past

eh its ok

i'll allow you a few words at last.. before i take u to the bosses
they say dead men have no friends.. is that why snitchs a walking corpse??

nah not feeling this, and ending a punch with a question mark is usually going to take some of the sting out of it. I'm not saying there aren't some times and places where it may be appropriate, but that's something you should probably try to avoid until you're more advanced, with all due disrespect.


overall, gang signs was lotb. I think snitching had better wording and execution throughout

mvgt snitch
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