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Old 05-29-2020, 01:35 PM   #7
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Ry runnin this fool pockets. Im about to clown this sucker
Cuz I’m takin this Mando w/ the beam just like that bounty hunter

cool opener

U couldn’t handle tag beef kid. U’ve never had skills rippin
Plus everything ‘Sai Dished’ proved he was never the Meal Ticket

I think the pause in side dish is a bit kinda throws off the wp phonetically but decent

INF u mid tier or top? U left the tourney shitless kid
U tried giving Cash Assistance then he found out he couldn’t benefit

execution and wording is cool here, the only drawback is that cash flips are hard to implement without seeming played

& we hate all ur drops pussy. U ain’t savage or vicious
If ‘Sai Show Violence’ I guarantee u what he channels is scripted

this is alright, wording couldve been more aggressive

On my court I’m a soldier. Against the vets u lack composure
It’s ironic u had ur shot to check Answer & wound up crossing over

Think maybe you could've had an A.I. or stronger basketball reference in the set-up, but this is cool




His girl
Sneaks away to fuck me at work cuz this losers avg
I slam it on the break after shifts - we pray u'd jump in moving traffic

ok opener

Dont meditate on the loss, seek help or a pill request
And from A MD Ry, Zen's not enough to process the mental stress

I'm guessing MD is mental distress or mental disorder, I think you're doing a little too much with the wp here

Kids depressed? Wait til votes turn em the littlest girl
Golden Globe would fit his performance being pissed at the world

kinda funny, just not a huge hit

Ya body holding THAT much mass up borders insanity
Climbing stairs legs 'gave out' so much they got awards in philanthropy

Bleh, I had a similar bar to this for my verse this week so I'll probably scrap it. It's decent, just mad your battle's up first

The gat w/ me. Empty 1 in ur gut then swallow the butt
Squeeze on your waist like a GERD'll & that have ya coughing up blood

I like the idea, execution could be a little smoother

I think inf's traffic bar is lotb, but I think ryno was a little more consistent overall. I might be the only one who feels that way, but that is what it is.


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