Take this as critique and not criticism.. It sounds like you could use a fair amount more practice working on your delivery. Your voice is pretty solid and for most of it the flow was ok... but, it didn’t sound natural.. Frankly, it sounded like you haven’t spent much time rhyming. But, I’m also judging this based against the polished legitimate acts I listen to regularly (rather than guys on the net trying to work on getting better), so I don’t mean to be too harsh. I can’t really picture myself listening to this again... but, keep at it. It takes a lot of time and practice for folks to find their voice. So, keep rhyming. Cheers.
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