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Old 05-28-2020, 11:09 AM   #11
Steve Fox
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that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing
keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that
somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks


vs.

Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain
Bitch like snowpiecer (typo made this confusing), even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train.

You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit
If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse

v - Enbombz. In a battle of mostly nameplays, this was a close battle between the two. I felt En got it slightly, even though the quotables were nearly the same. Packed damn near had LOTB, but the wording for his Sour Worms bar was so iffy and long, I almost didn't quote it, which is why I italicized it. Instead, En had the LOTB with the snowpiercer bar, which outside of the typo, I thought was hilarious. He should do more of those, rather than the "do _ to _ like _" or "I'll ___________" stuff. Packed's extremely long bars took a bit out of the punch for me, as many were stretched to contain unnecessary words. I didn't feel a lot of it, but with the right wording and condensing, he could be good.
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