You write like you open the pad and just draw blanks, enough said
When I draw it's like an etch a sketch way the lines connect the dots to your head
This is a miss for me, the only thing that seems relevant to etch a sketch is "lines connecting", there's no dots or heads involved so the execution is all off.
Ur bitch beggin for the D I told her go get clean then maybe a back rub
But I had a sudden change of heart when seeing her naked so I threw my toaster in the bath tub
kinda funny but too matter-of-fact for me and not enough emphasis on displaying lyricism
I'm 100% real strips earned and all he's just a fake dork
My shit like that new laser weapon yours just a big joke - Space Force
Nah, not digging this. A bit too simple and not very creative
Fk this RB clown finally coming around reaching for attention on NC
1-2 you seem to be alright but them whole verse the opposite of fermented cheese
Not really feeling the concept, and the wording on this is also a miss
Text career'll never transpire to legend status we barely know whatchu talm'bout
Closest relation it's got is kungs nose the way they're both shaped like a downspout
Kinda funny, still a bit simple but solid closer
Bullshitting has gotten you this far in the ring with me, this seems to be ur chance... champ
Nah, let's bet ur about to tango with death ..ill make sure this is your last dance.
Not feeling it, i've seen similar ideas and this is just not very creative or hard
Just like the url, I'm a true netcee and I give the weak nerds their deserving casket
Thinking U real sihk but you'll get eliminated quicker than him in Ultimate Madness.
A bit too simple and the pronunciation it "seek", this is meh but not the worst
I have defeated your lack of originality before, you're the worst with words
U couldn't try a new angle nxt if you were to host kurts return
The angles been done before (no pun intended), the only thing new here is the nxt aspect which isn't pronounced "Next" by anyone
I am tossing your dead body somewhere you shitty, cunt
They'll find incredibles in a stream: That's Disney Plus
I like the overall idea, the execution is a miss for me because incredibles is plural and the way you used it in this context needed to be singular (incredible). You could've had a slightly better set-up that lead to incredible's being a possessive and it might've connected a little better. Solid bar though
I've body bagged many times but this time I can say I know the art, I mastered it.
For the green, anger me and ill have incredible out quicker than Banner Did
Eh hulk bars are a bit outdated and this wasn't a super fresh approach to it. This is ok as a closer
overall, I think I agree that disney plus is probably lotb - but even outside of that bar, I felt like rican was just a little bit more consistent than incredible
mvgt slecht
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