Vote neighbor.
Man these bars are long. Age reference was dope. After that it took a turn. You have some real good concepts man, but you’re stuffing the bars with too much. Simplify it. Cool verse
Flow, can’t say I felt much from you. Obviously forced a lot and maybe you were short on time. Better luck next week my dogg
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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