Neighbor
Silenced MP7's.. one wrong look, I'll leave ya brains on the glass.
Fuck Letter, I should've gave Ore-Ida potato; now I gotta grab the Bangers & Mash.
Not much of a diss
You ROBBED Des - every single punch you attempted was played.
16 lines of "old" angles & "tired" concepts; even had 1 or 2 where you referenced his age.
Nice
I'm clutchin an FN, but this rusty boot knife gonna hurt the worst.
FUCK fish & chips.. you want beef; shank over the Barracuda like Surf 'n' Turf.
Not feelin
So take a breath 'fore this bayonet turns ya face to red chowder.
Spray from the handle wet up this Welsh faggot; he should be used to takin lead showers.
Meh @ the ending
Have you hogtied in the tub.. water runnin while this Ruger 9 firing.
I'm all Overflow w/ the toaster - tryna turn his bathroom to a suicide crime scene.
I like the creativity but the ending wasn't harsh enough. And no accent can make this rhyme well
I'm into S&M; sluts bow to me, then get down on all fours.
The only bitches callin Flowmaster'd rather wrap their lips around the exhaust.
Decent, simple punch, but there's no way you thought this rhymed
From the Audemars' to Rolex's.. there's no tellin what my wrist's fuckin worth.
You TAG Heuer's w/ the rubber strap-on 'em, too; payin for sex & your dick doesn't work.
Pretty sure it's "tag - Hoy - er", so not a smooth wp. Punch wording is off too
"Upset Champion," huh? I'ma take you a peg down in this League.
Only time you had a leg up on your opponent.. was on ya back while the ref counted to 3.
Decent
.45 got a kick like Kung Fu; got "Flow" on a bullet w/ the Colt to his lips.
Squeezin til the plastic melts.. I'll put ya name in the Mag when I'm roasting this Grip.
Filler
My swagger's ungodly, you can't compete - I'm catchin a homi.
You're too stiff.. like a stick in the mud & I'm lookin for a place to do THAT w/ ya body.
Unnecessary ellipsis. Didn't like the wording, concept was straight
Decent verse. The excellently-worded age bar was the best one, didn't expect that misdirection. Flowmaster & leg up were simple but good. Overflow, tag heuer, and stick in the mud could've been reworded. You must have a weird accent.
7/10
VS
Flow
How’s one-man Army of the Pharoah’s gonna come for the king?
You ain’t out Swag N Flow.. only battles you were EVER good at no longer a thing.
I'm assuming that was a league or somethin. At the end of the day, admitting he was good at anything is weak
Supplement drinking pussy. You’re still a nerd you just juice
Go play Meteorologist... Pin-pointing your ass to roids ain’t working for you.
Above avg filler
97% certain this dudes a Necro loving posh little faggot.
I gives a fuck if Neighbourhood. Imma terrace block off when I catch him.
Above avg filler
You could star in Honey, I Shrunk The Kids with the size your balls
You’re Fagin from Oliver Twist. those ill-gotten Gains never enriched your life at all.
Over my head.
You might have taught Kung not to sleep, but this won’t even be fucking close.
‘cause Neighbors nowhere near the greatest... I live in a bungalow.
Simple. Almost TOO simple
Fuck the PED’s he’s prescribed with. All it left hemisphere of who his ex has been ridin’
now ‘brain on the side’ weighs on your mind heavier than Encephalitis.
Ok, but hemisphere is a bit of a stretch.
Lemme remind ‘em why no-one wanted you back, Neighbour
if I’m ‘owing twenty’ it could be worse.. like your record against Beyond at RapFlava.
I like the owing twenty but damn this coulda been better. And if it was better, it should've been the opener
You’re trash playa.. mighta won last week but you won’t match me though
You took apart Letters just for me to use ‘em this week for your ransom note.
Ok, but I'm quickly getting tired of the "you beat/lost to ____ last week" bars
This faggot smokes cigarettes constantly. ignoring what is to come
Malignant Tumour won’t affect him, until diagnosed with one on the lungs.
If there's a wp with malignant tumour, i aint get it. So, swing & a miss
I’m a glass half empty kinda guy. but i’ll crack a bottle for this chump
one Chardonnay’ll have him pouring out his heart like a maudlin drunk.
Ok.
Not a bad verse. Even though the first half was blah, there weren't a lot of complete misses/terrible concepts, just shit that needed cleaning up.
6/10
Age reference = LOTB
overflow, flowmaster, leg up > bungalow, owing twenty, chardonnay
Vote: Neighbor
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