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Old 06-16-2013, 03:47 AM   #4
Rawn M.D.
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pretty dope...i enjoyed the first half and the end more then the middle tbh...

the flow was fluid as fuck tho...some lines stood out ie:'taught me how to walk away, but couldnt go with me tho'

but ntohing was like OMG...but i dont think that was the intention of this...i mean u said that urself and the title says it as well...just a conceptual verse...so for what it is, this was a smooth, effortless enjoyable read to me...

well done.
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