FGR
biatec - bit obscure as wordplay but we've all been there, executed well though
inlet - this was okay again wouldn't know the word/link to tie in straight off the bat though.
Madarin been done a few time and better tbh. Always seen it as man daring as well but accents and all that.
Letter
opener - decent jab got half a nose exhale
mayo sand etcs -not as good as opener but follows well
sunken place - sunken place was a weird phrase even though I know what you mean, okay with all the tie ins still workrd well
baptism- seen similar but you added in the nose detail and it was delivered well so okay
I got let pretty easy here. Fgr was okay here but Letterman put up a pretty solid verse.
v/Lettermans
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