Answer, you need to shorten those bars up. You’re basically just talking and then rhyming the last word at this point. I understand flow takes a backseat in a battle but your shit has chapters. Good concepts for the most part with poor execution.
INF your stuff was a little better and MUCH easier to read. You had a couple decent hits and it read comfortably.
Vote - INF
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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