I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
Concept isnt the freshest thing in the world and the angle could be more unique, but this is decent
Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
Kinda funny, i like the general concept but in actuality this bar doesn't have much of a tangible meaning
I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
I like this
Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
cool concept and it's tied together well
See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
I think you could've omitted the word "blue" here, otherwise this is ok but the angle could be more creative
Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
Nah this is a miss for me, old concept thats been done and doesnt belong in this decade
I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
This concept's been done before but the high speed part kinda made me lol, i think the general idea could've been executed better
Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
Nah everything is this too literal except the coke reference which is played
You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
this is decent
Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul
Juul/jewel was a fresh idea but Ive never known anyone to refer to any part of a firearm as a vape so this execution is a miss for me
I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
This is a bit long-winded for a punchline but execution is solid and it's kinda funny
You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
too statement-like for me, not really feeling this
Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
I like the concept, not really feeling the execution here
never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
Nah, I think you could've done more with this by tying jordan or parts of the documentary into the angle. A bit lacking as is
You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
Eh this is ok, Im usually not a huge fan of doing nameplays on yourself and I think this couldve been harder
I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
I like this
remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
Nah too statement-like and just not enough thought put into the bar
You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
lol kinda same comment as above except this bar was funny to me so it's more acceptable
Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers
Nah I wasn't feeling this, could've closed harder
LOTB for me was Plasma followed by Redd Foxx. Snitch's opener was also solid but I think he had a few more misses than Zuch, while Zuch stayed overall more consistent
mvgt Zuch
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