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Pharaohs Army · 05-19-2020, 10:55 PM

Bodey

Animal abuse

Good introduction about upbringing

Good rhyme and meter

Meat of the verse was better than the ending

Inno

Nice twist albeit cliche

She's a demon of choice
Phrase of the battle here, I just don't know if it's enough

You didn't seem to focus as much as Bodey on rhyme and meter, but it ultimately comes down to:
Which Verse Piqued My Interest As I Was Reading or Re-Reading it and that would be Bodey's this week.

Thanks to both for the read.

05-19-2020, 10:55 PM	#15
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Bodey Animal abuse Good introduction about upbringing Good rhyme and meter Meat of the verse was better than the ending Inno Nice twist albeit cliche She's a demon of choice Phrase of the battle here, I just don't know if it's enough You didn't seem to focus as much as Bodey on rhyme and meter, but it ultimately comes down to: Which Verse Piqued My Interest As I Was Reading or Re-Reading it and that would be Bodey's this week. Thanks to both for the read.