[Bodey]

i like how you squirm at cute puppies getting dismembered (ugh, as do i, i'll never forgive myself for that line) but here you are fucking a corpse in mass detail lol. like i said in the past, you're a sick fuck Uni. also, the ending to that first one kind of confused me, was he under hypnosis or something? i definitely favored this verse over the second one just because of it's hard-to-beat portrayal of a truly sick mind. also, anytime i hear the terms "dark passenger" it just reminds me of Dexter lol, i had to watch myself with that in my own piece because i felt like i was biting off a show i used to binge-watch. the second one i feel the zombie subject is an overdone one, and despite being technically on point, i still think the first verse won me over a lot more as a piece of writing and storyline. you're good at what you do sir

v/Uni