vulgar, that was such an awesome verse. At first read i'm like, well that was pretty anti-climatic. Gave a second read and if what i'm thinking is correct, what a beautifully rendered story. beautiful in terms of writing and concept. the story was a very dark one. I'm interpreting that she's very much involved in the death of her father. the word choices were subtle when it had to be and "ambiguously overt" when it had to be - Some deals go smoothly, and some can be cutthroat. I enjoy this type of character development where its not done in a direct way but in a round about way. things like the description of her father's ruthlessness and then you attached a valuable piece of info in a very calculated, almost endearing manner, "she's her father's daughter" - man that shit says alot about her without saying much about her. awesome.
adverse, this was really awesome bro.Concept of this verse was so cool. The verse seems to be in the voice of a painting. obviously a very strong connection with the picture topic this week. you're the woman in the center of the painting. I honestly think this is your best verse. The language used, the flow, the imagery, everything just kind of came together so beautifully. the way you described her window to our world was so fucking cool. "Yes the painter ...so focused on alleviating his tortured soul, he never realized he created one" now that line was awesome.
i choose this as my BOTW. This is like the hardest battle to vote on. YOu got vulgar who really told story about the dark tendency using carefully selected word at such precise moments then you got adverse who drop one of the most creative verse i've read this season so far. wow...hard hard hard. ok, i will say that by the slimmest and i mean slimmest slim of margin, i have to vote Vulgar because of the intrigue. When i read it, i kept discovering things about it. Adverse entry showed strong creative writing and its really haunting but i think Vulgar's details and nuances won him by like the slimmest margin possible. Such an awesome battle guys. Thanks for the read.
v/ Vulg
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