Cool battle. I feel like I'm saying this a lot this week, but whatever.
Bard - opening six lines were cool, I can't really give too much credit to personals because I've been gone for so long, but you had a link to back it up, and cool quotes and whatnot, so sure, it works. Traffic circle was cool too, Lightwand as well.
Wand - wording's off on the opener, still a cool nameplay idea though. clap over dialogue was good. the rest was either a miss or worded just a tad poorly. hopscotch line could've been great, but the wording made it suffer.
V - Bard
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