I found this quote and laughed. Dude your writtens are the worse
So much of your rhymes are ass, we're getting moon'd with every verse
funny, i think the wording could've been a little more effective but ok opener
Your words are outdated... but I guess posting old shit is the new norm
Insulate with his concepts when I punch him thru a wall he'll keep the house warm
I like the overall idea, execution is decent. Falls a little short of a haymaker for me but solid punch
Some say im inhuman! A cruel savage with the switchblade or shotty
Your also considered inhuming ......when I begin that process with your lifeless body
ok concept, wordplay is passable - I think you might've been able to do a little more with it but cool
Imma perfect shot w/ the gun bro. When I pull it out .....his future becomes grim
Trust me these bullets won't miss In, that's just how his family's gonna report him
Nah, I think naturally you would put a pause in "bullets wont Miss In" that makes this a little clunky
Shotgun blast to the GUT bitch! The 12 gauge leave you dead on your lawn
Doctors won't bother stitching your absence, that whole fucking section will be gone
I like the idea, the execution is solid. Decent closer overall
No need for the tough talk, I’m a as real as they come niggah ya bore me
First to scream “they sleepin on me”... only cuz yah bars pillow soft they get nothing but snores G...
I've seen the general idea done quite a few times, so its a miss for me
Aim at ur chest Yah numbers up, 2 in the head now yah dead faster
Then hang ur body on display only time they’ll say FGRS jersey hung from the raptors...
Raptors/rafters? I don't know, to be honest I think this one went over my head
Pussy this shit is no joke, come at you with punches until I see red
Let’s be honest ur no match in the 1-2’s that’s all fact! Last time it only took 1, this time eat ten...
ok
Saw your vid, disgusting another fat nerd rapping what are the odds?????
And the basement is fitting, cuz you literally look like a 30 year old version of sloth...
this is funny, might land harder in a pic battle
Yo this battle is over, tbh from the first shot it was all grim
But IF YOU THINK ABOUT IT! Technically it really took a miracle for me to win!
Nah, I think this general idea has been done too many times
overall I think FGR just had better execution and fresher concepts here
v/ FGR
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