[Universe]

Okay that's better lol.

Yeah, I mean... this was a pleasure to read. Epic in scope and equal in follow through. There's a little too much to breakdown though so I'll keep it more general... The way you present your verses is amazing to me... It's literally like a novel. The detail is staggering but unfortunately, I feel you will lose some people because of it. But not this guy lol. I love how your pieces tend to all come full circle too... From what I gathered, Walter WAS the Wendigo, and the entire time he was searching for himself. I think the fall into the abyss was metaphorical, showing his "proper" society-acceptable side hiding away within himself so the primal beast can be let loose. Am I correct about that? I hope I am.

You are probably the best storytelling topical writer I have ever seen, in terms of detail and plotting and just straight up passion. And that includes myself back in my heyday lol. Only thing I can really suggest to you is to dumb yourself down a bit... lol. Sounds like I'm joking but I'm not. People don't like to be made to feel stupid and they will mask this feeling with indifference, if you let them. Concentrate on perfecting your lines and being as crystal clear as possible without losing your talents... that's the tight rope walking routine we all need to balance.

As much as we want to show people what we can do... It's almost more important to let people in to enjoy themselves and not feel overwhelmed.

So yeah, basically you're TOO good so stop with that lol. Great work here, well worth the wait for me. Come back to the GWL man... I'd say you're more than ready. :)