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Old 05-15-2020, 11:31 AM   #3
Johnny 6 feet
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Seems like you got a graveyard worth of bones to pick Uni. Good sense of rhythm and rhyme throughout this diss piece. Some stand out lines made me chuckle:

"And what the fuck is a Clutbuck? Seems like I'm talking to three handles
I'll slowly dismantle you until you pour piss like the aqua marine mammal"

"Couldn't even make that fabricated "convo" authentic, this assholes useless
Ask Bayou kid, those who REALLY have your number are always the last to use it..."

My favourites^ I went into the archives and it seems I just missed the drama by a week or so. Is there a straight text battle match on the way? Anywho, I'm not the best at deconstructing (or writing) diss pieces but I thought you threw some hard punches here. As usual, i'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff.

Thanks for the feed on Corona and Lime. Good luck in GWL bud.

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