I felt like I was reading a piece of classic literature than a by the numbers open mic effort. This was brilliantly original in it's concept and beautiful realised by your choice of vocab which gave a sense of sophistication without coming off as pretentious. That's a difficult balance to achieve. The imagery was great; I could visualise the story in all it's locations, twists and turns. I had a great sense of the main characters personality and you linked the piece to the picture perfectly. Well done.
Keep up the quality work mate.
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